47 ( +1 | -1 ) Just a few ideas ...Your request could include any of the following:
1. Why you're requesting analysis (e.g., "I can't figure out where I went wrong", or "What should I have done here?", or simply, "I'm interested in your comments") 2. Your own analysis of the game 3. References to previously played games that are similar 4. A please! Not trying to be funny, but you're asking other people to invest their time on your behalf, and it doesn't hurt to be appropriately polite.
30 ( +1 | -1 ) Well, while I'm always up for a bit of analysis now and again, the posted game appears to be a blitz game. I've always personally found it a bit silly to annotate a game where just the preliminary analysis takes longer to finish than the time the players spent actually playing the game.